Comments on: Oooh! I Wrote Something for Upper Management http://georgemauer.net/blog/oooh-i-wrote-something-for-upper-management/ George Mauer is on the net Sun, 16 May 2010 17:22:49 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Steven A. Lowe http://georgemauer.net/blog/oooh-i-wrote-something-for-upper-management/comment-page-1/#comment-5 Steven A. Lowe Tue, 30 Sep 2008 20:17:07 +0000 http://nothingyoumissed.wordpress.com/?p=6#comment-5 George, If this was for executives, they probably didn't read it. Try reducing it to on eintroductory sentence to establish the context, five bullet points to list the main problems, and one summary sentence to tell them what you recommend and how much money it will save them if they agree to let you do it. --S George,

If this was for executives, they probably didn’t read it. Try reducing it to on eintroductory sentence to establish the context, five bullet points to list the main problems, and one summary sentence to tell them what you recommend and how much money it will save them if they agree to let you do it.

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